Comments on Right Behind: The End of the World, Part 6

D'oh. Proofreading is our friend...Anyway, seriou...

2008-07-14T07:51:00.000-07:00

D'oh. Proofreading is our friend...

Anyway, seriously, I do appreciate all the nice things everyone has said. Thank you.

Also, there is still one more installment. The story has an epilogue that I think it needs in order to create a sense of completion it currently lacks. I was trying to avoid it, but seeing everything together, well, I can't...

I loved the serial from start to end. All the RB w...

2008-07-14T06:45:00.000-07:00

I loved the serial from start to end. All the RB writers are amazingly inventive.

Of course, coming over from LBFridays I have one small spelling correction:

All his anger, confusion, and frustration focused on the impertinant device and he THREW it at the asphalt.

And this is the world that LaJenkins sincerely wan...

2008-07-13T00:56:00.000-07:00

And this is the world that LaJenkins sincerely want.

They really don't need to worry about their souls. Theirs completely rotted away long, long ago.

This was an amazing piece.

Great story. Good dialog and description and terri...

2008-07-12T11:18:00.000-07:00

Great story. Good dialog and description and terrible (in a good way) emotions evoked by tight prose. Lovely.

I loved this story from the beginning, and this la...

2008-07-12T04:45:00.000-07:00

I loved this story from the beginning, and this last section is no exception. The sparse dialogue at the end carries far more emotion than the entirety of the actual LB books. Had the characters acted like yours, not heart-of-stone cardboard cutout strawmen, they could even have been good books.