tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6545302900560676544.post505974553348995878..comments2023-12-19T17:38:40.984-08:00Comments on Right Behind: Does God Have Plans for Verna? Part 2Spherical Timehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02435055266803359329noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6545302900560676544.post-13438391447949279152009-03-30T08:10:00.000-07:002009-03-30T08:10:00.000-07:00Hehehe. I love how you've just created a little s...Hehehe. I love how you've just created a little surprise for Buck to walk into. Nice.Spherical Timehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02435055266803359329noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6545302900560676544.post-90964041257100248732009-03-18T21:12:00.000-07:002009-03-18T21:12:00.000-07:00violet- What Anonymous said. I must admit, I forgo...violet- What Anonymous said. I must admit, I forgot that possible interpretation or I would have handled that line a bit differently.<BR/><BR/>Anonymous- Well, if I can keep up, let's just say, it's a secret, but one you can probably guess. The action at this point is set in the Deity's world and the characters are acting as actual reporters trying to get to the bottom of it. One other question I'll want to explore is what is the "Better World" and what is the Deity's World and is there really only one way between them?Cerberushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03656395073693185520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6545302900560676544.post-57404518511132280692009-03-18T15:56:00.000-07:002009-03-18T15:56:00.000-07:00Ohhhh...I did not think “a crush” to be ellipses i...Ohhhh...<BR/><BR/>I did not think “a crush” to be ellipses in, “I knew you used to have a…”<BR/><BR/>That, um, changes things.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6545302900560676544.post-69095717277170632682009-03-18T04:06:00.000-07:002009-03-18T04:06:00.000-07:00The full sentence would be "I knew you used to hav...The full sentence would be "I knew you used to have a crush on me" or something similar. Alice is saying it, and she's apologising for hugging Verna. Alice is trans, Verna isn't. <BR/><BR/>Loving the story so far, very much. One question, though: are you going to tie this story into the ending of "God Has Plans For Chloe" or set it entirely in the Deity's world?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6545302900560676544.post-92069814162299754272009-03-17T13:41:00.000-07:002009-03-17T13:41:00.000-07:00Quick question.The last bit of dialogue in Verna's...Quick question.<BR/><BR/>The last bit of dialogue in Verna's office is kindof muddled, so I'm not completely sure who says this:<BR/><BR/><EM>“I’m so sorry. I should have rethought that. I knew you used to have a…I didn’t know it was still around. Oh god. I’m-“</EM><BR/><BR/>Is it Verna saying this? I sortof thought so, but it's not clear to me what she's apologizing for, and the quotation marks don't add up for this to be the case.<BR/><BR/>Is Alice saying this? Is the implication that she and Verna are both trans, only Alice is going to have her surgery (well, except she isn't), and Verna hasn't?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com