tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6545302900560676544.post2949770999700497980..comments2023-12-19T17:38:40.984-08:00Comments on Right Behind: The Four Men and the ApocalypseSpherical Timehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02435055266803359329noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6545302900560676544.post-36304612632422410932008-03-23T13:37:00.000-07:002008-03-23T13:37:00.000-07:00I disagree with drak pope's first nitpick. You ca...I disagree with drak pope's first nitpick. You can certainly acknowledge someone's presence without welcoming them.<BR/><BR/>However, there should be a apostrophe after "Bruce Barnes" at the end because the church in that case is considered his possession.<BR/><BR/>Well done though, evil.Spherical Timehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02435055266803359329noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6545302900560676544.post-40517244164729505172008-03-22T23:57:00.000-07:002008-03-22T23:57:00.000-07:00Awesome new Right Behind. Just a couple of tiny me...Awesome new Right Behind. Just a couple of tiny mechanical nitpicks though:<BR/><BR/>"Bruce Barnes acknowledged but did but did not welcome the men" {it has to be one or the other, I think).<BR/><BR/>"Their is no salvation" {I think that should be 'there').<BR/><BR/>Other than that, a short but really poignant piece. It's surprising how much you can do with a character like Bruce Barnes. In a sense, it's good that Steele & Williams gave us so little to work with; it gives you people the opportunity to make something of the material.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com